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sonicmadgirl didn't sign in agai (Guest), April 6th, 2013, 9:23 am     Reply

ooooh, nasty....
I can't wait to see how long they last.

Shibuya (Guest), April 6th, 2013, 7:42 pm     Reply

Wow,This was far one of the BEST comics I have ever read,Seriously,The quality the intense scenarios and of course,The story twists.I just wished that "Arrogant" didn't die.

matakatari, April 7th, 2013, 8:56 pm     Reply

<3 morphE
Oh my gosh I cant wait for the next update ^^ I just hope Indifferent doesn't die >.<

Xeira (Guest), April 8th, 2013, 12:20 am     Reply

Grammar Nazi? I am.
"Billy trembled at being found and even at being pinned underneath the corpse someone who he'd seen standing only a few feet away"
Uhm, what? I'm afraid that sentence may need some fixing. ^^"
Perhaps a "." after "found" and the cut out the "even"? Also needs an "of" between corpse and someone. XP

Sorry for being pedantic!

Other than that, loving the comic so much since I found it!

Don Quixotes, April 8th, 2013, 1:30 am     Reply

@Xeira: I find the grammatical errors to be kind of irritating, but I prefer to let the authours ask for editorial help first.

ChibiSilverWings, April 8th, 2013, 1:45 am     Reply

@Don Quixotes: and @Xeira:
Totally appreciate the corrections. Honestly I think a few slip by because of how we write the script and compile the pages. It's shuffled between 2-4 people when we edit the script, in trying to make the wording click, we'll change parts of sentences or paragraphs and sometimes we miss the smaller things because of that. Any time you see something, just let us know! :D We'll be glad to fix it. I'm sorry to say this probably won't be the last time XD So if anyone sees a grammar mistake, don't feel bad saying so.

LOLDUDE (Guest), April 8th, 2013, 9:02 pm     Reply


SleepyAssailant, May 12th, 2013, 12:47 pm     Reply

@LOLDUDE: That's your opinion. Not really a nice one, because these people worked hard on it.