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D3c3nd4n7, July 1st, 2014, 9:05 am     Reply

Kens a really level headed guy 0.0

Don Quixotes, July 1st, 2014, 9:08 am     Reply

I'll be honest, whenever I hear her last name I always think of the way Coach says the name in L4D2. 'Ellis? Ellis, is thatchu?'

But on-topic, how's Ken gonna react to this? Asia on the phone, but unable to share any proper details...except maybe the fact she *can't* share details.

shylarah, July 1st, 2014, 9:55 am     Reply

Those black frames were a little odd but effective. Jolting, which is sort of like how Asia must feel, unable to get anything through.

Profpatsch, July 1st, 2014, 12:13 pm     Reply

That’s how I like my stories
Suspense, suspense, suspense. That feeling when you can’t wait to see what’s going to happen next.

Ethrenal, July 2nd, 2014, 10:26 am     Reply

Asia looks remarkably more emotive in her close up. I find it surprising that she is more affected by not being able to communicate than she was by the murders. Perhaps she is just used to dealing with things like that from her work with her father-figure.

Lunaroki, July 2nd, 2014, 4:45 pm     Reply

Ken: "I filed police report. Contacted college. Said you've been absent for two weeks. Can't track your cellphone. You still have it?"

There are words missing from the first two sentences and potentially from the third as well, yet I'm not sure if this is intentional or not. Are these missing words typos or just how Ken speaks, or maybe the way he speaks under such tense circumstances?

ChibiSilverWings, July 2nd, 2014, 5:25 pm     Reply

@Lunaroki: Thanks for keeping an eye out, in this case they are indeed intentional.

burningtyger, July 2nd, 2014, 9:24 pm     Reply

@Ethrenal: Indeed. But as the text points out, she was holding it in until now.