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Aslandus, August 21st, 2014, 7:09 am     Reply

Free county, Nebraska: New home of Hizrim, mighty wizard

D3c3nd4n7, August 21st, 2014, 9:31 am     Reply

Daemon? Fae? Goetic apparition? so many frightening possibilities D:

Mindsword2 (Guest), August 21st, 2014, 10:46 am     Reply

The odd part is that Hizrim is free do to Mage Asia. So either its lying, or she saved it and has no recollection of the event. I suppose she could have done something and not realized the significance, but that seems unlikely. Possibly in the cave with the boxes?

Arcblade, August 21st, 2014, 12:05 pm     Reply

Oh geez what did you do Asia?

burningtyger, August 21st, 2014, 2:35 pm     Reply

@Aslandus: @D3c3nd4n7: From what little I managed to gather from old thumbnails and sketches he originates from Alexis' old campaign, has the shape of a man, and may lurk in the dark corners of the mind...

Alexis_Royce, August 21st, 2014, 3:16 pm     Reply

Sorry, Hizrim got a massive redesign. Metagaming and won't be of any use here.

Ethrenal, August 21st, 2014, 3:41 pm     Reply

From the memories Hizram showed Asia, I would speculate that she freed him from the cave and then forgot.

burningtyger, August 21st, 2014, 5:26 pm     Reply

@Alexis_Royce: Smart girl.

burningtyger, August 21st, 2014, 5:31 pm     Reply

@Ethrenal:It depends on what the awful place is. At first reading I'd thought he might have somehow been tangled with the "farm." or cult Asia was mixed up with, and maybe restrained inside her soul until now. But perhaps it was indeed in the cave...

ChibiSilverWings, August 21st, 2014, 5:34 pm     Reply

@burningtyger: Haha we wanted to change things not just because the writing can be more organized and good, but also because we did a LOT of art and talking about the original haha we want it to be fresh for people who DID know what happened.

burningtyger, August 21st, 2014, 6:37 pm     Reply

@ChibiSilverWings: always good. Since the memories that flashed through Asia's head include ones from before she came here, I suspect our whisperer may well have been lurking in the shadows of her life long before she Awakened... feeding on the rage and frustration of her struggles.

Kot (Guest), August 22nd, 2014, 1:06 pm     Reply

Avatar, maybe?

Leliel (Guest), August 22nd, 2014, 7:34 pm     Reply

@Kot: Awakening doesn't have Avatars, the closest thing the NWoD comes is daimons. Which I doubt this is, since Asia is not asleep; daimons are the dreaming representation of a human's drive for self-improvement.

burningtyger, August 22nd, 2014, 10:02 pm     Reply

@Leliel: Well, Alexis (or was isit Chibi?) said they'd be mixing some CWoD with the new one. And Asia IS half-asleep... does trance count?